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5/3/2013

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scene 1

ACTION : Scene 1 starts with Kimie being at Amy's bedside, when Amy asked her mum to hold her hand. Kimie obliges. The whole time, Kimie tries her best to not shed a tear.
DIALOGUE : "Amy : Mum, take my hand."
TIMING : + - 10 seconds
CAMERA ANGLE : High 
CAMERA SHOT : Long Shot
PROPS : Teddy bear, hospital equipment, bed, chair, electrocardiogram

scene 2

ACTION : Amy apologises to her mum, Kimie for disobeying her and for abuse of alcohol. (insert flashback); Kimie forgave her daughter. Doctor interrupts and asked to speak to Kimie privately.
DIALOGUE : "Amy : Mum, I am so sorry for abusing alcohol, and disobeying you. I am such a bad daughter. I am sorry for putting you in this position."
                       "Kimie : It's okay, dear. We will just have to hope for the best."
                      "Doctor : I am sorry to interrupt but is it okay if i have a word with you in my office, Madam Kimie?
                     "Kimie : Sure doctor. (looks at Amy) I will be back in a few minutes. 
TIMING : + - 30 seconds
CAMERA ANGLE : Canted
CAMERA SHOT : Medium Long Shot
PROPS : Bed, hospital equipment, teddy bear
ACTION : (flashback) ; Amy partying and heavy drinking with a few of her friends. 
DIALOGUE : "Amy : How many bottles are we drinking today?"
                       "Amy's friend : 10 each!"
                       "Amy : Is that even possible?"
                       "Amy's friend : We will make it possible!"
                       "Amy : Okay!"
(30 minutes later) "Amy : Oh no, I am so drunk."
                                 "Amy's friend : Drink more! Enjoy life!"
                                 "Amy : Hahah alright then! Drink to life!"           
TIMING : + - 20 seconds
CAMERA ANGLE : Eye level
CAMERA SHOT : Medium Long Shot
PROPS : Table, chairs, alcohol bottles

scene 3

ACTION : Doctor invites Kimie into his office. They are having a conversation about Amy's condition. He tells her that Amy cannot be saved. Kimie cried. 
DIALOGUE : "Doctor : Please, have a seat. I'm afraid i have terrible news. As you know, your daughter's condition is not very well.       Her stomach is like a balloon, as if she was 9 months pregnant, her hair is falling off, her urine is black, her eyes is yellow and lost of apatite. The only things keeping her together is morphine intake."
                       "Kimie : *sobbing uncontrollably*
                       "Doctor : Her time will be up anytime soon. Ma'am, please prepare for the worst."
TIMING : + - 30 seconds
CAMERA ANGLE : Low
CAMERA SHOT : Medium shot
Props : Table, chair, office equipments

scene 4

ACTION : Back in the ward, Kimie returned to Amy's bedside. They are conversing about regrets, take backs and redos in their lives respectively. 
DIALOGUE : "Amy : If i could relive my whole life again, i would not choose this road. I am so sorry, ma. I always make you concerned, make you worried, make you mad. I promise not to that in the future. I want to live a happy life, with you, ma."
                       "Kimie : *while trying to hold back tears*, I will hold you to that promise, dear. I am glad you realised the harmful disadvantages of alcohol abuse. You will be fine, don't worry. 
                      "Amy : "Thanks ma *while smilling*. I love you. *closes both eyes*."
TIMING : + - 20 seconds
CAMERA ANGLE : Canted
CAMERA SHOT : Medium long shot
PROPS : Bed, hospital equipment, teddy bear, electrocardiogram
ACTION : A horizontal line appeared on the screen of the electrocardiogram. Amy is no longer alive. Kimie is screaming hysterically while beeping for the nurse, crying at the same time.   
DIALOGUE : (screaming) "NOOOOOO, This can't be happening!! HELPPP!!"
TIMING : + - 10 seconds
CAMERA ANGLE : Eye level
CAMERA SHOT : Medium Shot
PROPS : Electrocardiogram, hospital equipment, bed, teddy bear. 

scene 5

ACTION : Kimie and Amy's family members are at Amy's funeral. All are crying, hysterically. The doctor who was also at the funeral, offers his condolences. They are conversing about raising awareness among teenagers about alcohol abuse so noone else will feel this sorrow. 
DIALOGUE : "Doctor : Once again, I am so sorry about your loss."
                        "Kimie : It is okay, it is inevitable in Amy's case. But i wouldn't want any teen out there to suffer the same fate as Amy."
                        "Doctor : What are you suggesting, ma'am?"
                        "Kimie : I am planning to hold awareness talks and speeches to help raise awareness of excessive alcohol consumption.
                        "Doctor : Sounds like a brilliant plan."
TIMING : + - 20-30 seconds
CAMERA ANGLE : High & eye level  
CAMERA SHOT : Long shot & medium close-up
PROPS : Umbrella

scene 6

ACTION : Kimie standing on a stage in a school hall, giving a speech of disadvantages of excessive alcohol consumption to students.
DIALOGUE : "Kimie : There are many disadvantages of excessive alcohol comsumption, such as schizophrenia, depression, or anxiety disorders. Poverty, social isolation, and shyness may also be risk factors..."
TIMING : + - 15-20 seconds
CAMERA ANGLE : Long shot
CAMERA SHOT : Low
PROPS : Chairs. microphone, stand.
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5/3/2013

 
Amy Natasha Williams is lying on a hospital bed. She reaches out to her mum, Kimie, who is on her bedside, crying. Amy is requesting to her mum to hold her hand. In her other arm, clutching a soft toy. Kimie willingly and eagerly does so, as it might be the last time Amy requests of something. 

Amy apologises to her mum, Kimie for disobeying her and for drinking, a lot.  (flashback); Amy partying in club, and drinking. Still drinking even when she is drunk because of peer pressure. Kimie was trying her best to hold back her tears. She forgave her daughter, while holding her hand tightly. Doctor knocks on the door and asked to have a conversation with Kimie.

In the doctor's office, the doctor tells Kimie that Amy has no hope of living. The doctor said, Amy's stomach is like a balloon, as if she was 9 months pregnant, her hair is falling off, her urine is black, her eyes is yellow and lost of apatite. The only things keeping her together is morphine intake. Kimie by that time was already crying uncontrollably. The doctor then asked Kimie to be strong and to accept the fact. 

 Back in the ward, Kimie returns to Amy's bedside. They are having conversation about turning back time and undoing all of Amy's mistakes. All of a sudden, a horizontal line appeared constantly on the screen of the electrocardiogram. Amy's life at that second ended. Kimie was screaming hysterically while beeping for the nurse, crying at the same time. 


At Amy's funeral, Kimie and Amy's family members are crying hysterically. The doctor who is at the funeral sends his sincere condolences to Kimie. Kimie tells the doctor that she regrets not doing more from preventing Amy from drinking. Kimie then tells the doctor that she plans to hold talks in schools, colleges etc to raise awareness of excessive alcohol intake.


Kimie is in a primary school giving a speech on the disadvantages of drinking alcohol and getting addicted, to help raise awareness so that no other teens and their family respectively suffer the same fate as her daughter, Amy and her family. 
Scene : 1
Characters : Amy, Mother (Kimie)
Location : Hospital ward
Props : Bed, soft toy, hospital equipment


Scene : 2
Characters : Amy, Kimie, Amy's drinking friends
Location : Hospital ward, club
Props : Bed, soft toy, hospital equipment, alcohol bottles




Scene : 3
Characters : Doctor, Kimie
Location : Doctor's office
Props : Table, chair, office equipments




Scene : 4
Characters : Amy, Kimie
Location : Hospital ward
Props : Bed, electrocardiogram, hospital equipments




Scene : 5
Characters : Kimie, Kimie's family members, doctor
Location : Park
Props : Umbrella




Scene : 6
Characters : Kimie, public audiences
Location : School
Props : Chairs, microphone